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 - a [[place]].
 	- a [[protopia]]
 		- It exists at least in my [[my mind]].
-	- The world after the [[flancian revolution]].
+	- Perhaps the world after the [[flancian revolution]] or a similar world changing event.
 		- The world of the [[flancians]] could be said to be similar to ours, the result of evolution over a material reality that sometimes allows for things to be made better with the application of effort towards the achievement of an [[incremental improvement]].
-		- Flancia is, I believe, a place that exists as an hypothetical shared future.
-		- At the very least Flancia exists in the [[multiverse]].
+		- Flancia is, I believe, a place that exists in our hypothetical shared future.
+		- You could say Flancia exists in the [[multiverse]].
 - a [[project]].
 	- [[go]] https://flancia.org
 	- I am a [[Flancian]] and this [[Agora]] contains my [[manifesto]].