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 ## Agora Commons
 
-The heart of an Agora is the [[Agora Commons]]. It is a [[digital commons]] to start with, extending to an inclusive virtual and real [[commons]] able to support its associated communities materially.
+The heart of an Agora is the [[Agora Commons]]. It is a [[digital commons]] to start with, extending potentially to an inclusive virtual and real [[commons]] able to sustainably support its associated communities materially.
 
-The [[Triad of Commoning]] as described in [[Free, Fair and Alive]] can be seen to apply to the [[knowledge commons]] we would like to build here.
+The [[Triad of Commoning]] as described in [[Free, Fair and Alive]] can be seen to apply to the [[knowledge commons]] we would like to build here, and this informs the design of the [[Agora project]].
 
 TODO (Diagram): focus on praxis or commoning? Making the commons a higher level section would probably clarify the structure a bit, allow me to bring in the [[Triad of Commoning]], etc.