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 ## A question
 
-I was born in Argentina, grew up and studied there and moved to Switzerland when I was 30. I am a Staff Engineer working for [[Google]]. I am engaged in [[Effective Altruism and occasionally allow myself to hedge irrationally after careful consideration :) 
+I was born in Argentina; I grew up and studied there and moved to Switzerland for work when I was 30. I am a Staff Engineer currently at [[Google]]. I am engaged in [[Effective Altruism]] and occasionally allow myself to hedge irrationally after careful consideration :) 
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 ## Farewell
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