diff --git a/all watched over by machines of loving grace.md b/all watched over by machines of loving grace.md
index 0015ad6b3..a43758d74 100644
--- a/all watched over by machines of loving grace.md	
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@@ -56,6 +56,15 @@
   - [[lovers]]
     - "put her in a low brass bed"
     - women aren't very active in many of these, perhaps I'm biased by the phallocentric opener but Brautigan feels a bit objectifying?
+  - [[a mid-february sky dance]]
+    - I liked this one, this feels more participative (a proper dance)
+    - "dance toward me, please, as if you were a star / with light-years piled on top of your hair, smiling"
+  - [[hey, bacon!]]
+    - [[desire]]
+  - [[after halloween slump]]
+    - [[magic]]
+  - [[hollywood]]
+    - 
   - and more :)
 - a [[film]]
   - by [[adam curtis]]
diff --git a/journal/2021-08-28.md b/journal/2021-08-28.md
index 7968e56cf..0d9cbc968 100644
--- a/journal/2021-08-28.md
+++ b/journal/2021-08-28.md
@@ -19,5 +19,4 @@
   - [[conocimientos tradicionales]]
     - [[en]] [[traditional knowledge]]
   - [[jorge carrera medaglia]]
-- [[push]] [[jesus]]
-  - 
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+- [[push]] [[jesus]]
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