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 	- #push [[agora abstracts]]
 		- #pull [[social knowledge graph]] [[distributed knowledge graph]]
 		- An Agora is a [[distributed knowledge graph]] provisioned and maintained by a community as a [[commons]].
-			- Whereas a [[personal knowledge graph]] usually contain resources authored or collected by a single person, and a wiki usually contains resources produced by a community, an Agora is a [[social knowledge graph]] based on the [[integration]] of both personal and group resources into [[nodes]] which work by default as [[collections]].
+			- Whereas a [[personal knowledge graph]] usually contain resources authored or collected by a single person, and a wiki usually contains resources produced by a community, an Agora is a [[social knowledge graph]] based on the [[integration]] of both personal and group resources.
 		- Being a graph, an Agora can be defined as a set of vertexes or [[nodes]] `V` (entities) and [[edges]] `E` (known links between entities, optionally annotated).
 			- Agora [[nodes]] are defined by the set of known resources *about* the entity described by their title.
 				- Put another way, an [[agora node]] is a community maintained [[collection]] of voice-preserving individual contributions by default.
 				- Note that Agora nodes generalize in turn to graphs defined in a local context around the [[subnodes]] represented by known resources.
-			- Note that because links can be annotated in an Agora, the Agora is in itself a [[hypergraph]].
+			- Note that because links in an Agora can be annotated (e.g. tagged or qualified by other nearby links), the Agora is in fact a [[hypergraph]].
 			- Finally, individual agoras are expected to federate and organize into Agora networks, which are of course in themselves graph-like at a higher level.
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