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 	- [[Flancia is a Pattern Language]]
 - [[Work]]
 	- Layoffs finally happened in [[ZRH]]. Four people affected in [[Workspace SRE]], including my skip-manager who is a great manager and person and a lovely person who was preparing for promo.
-	- Everybody is affected by both the silliness of the whole process,
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+	- Most people I talk to seem affected by both the silliness of the whole process and the relative relief that it's happened already
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