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 - [[18]] is [[right understanding]] in the [[flancia]] [[pattern language]].
-  - Flancia is in some ways a [[calendar]]. I usually revisit the Flancia Pattern language daily, considering the day of the date as my default focus.
-- [[drishtis]] ~ [[29]] as 29 tends to remind me of items on which my focus is trained on by default in the running month.
+  - Flancia is in some ways a [[calendar]]. I usually revisit the Flancia Pattern language daily, considering the current date as my default focus.
+- [[drishtis]] ~ [[29]] might be particularly interesting as it is a list; 29 tends to remind me of items on which my focus is trained on by default in the running month.
   - on this note [[7]] and [[17]] this month were beautiful as usual
   - [[20]] ~ [[agora slides]] this month as I'll present it to [[fotl]] in whichever shape it is :)
 - At this point I decided to start writing in the Agora assuming I have [[autopush]] on, even though I haven't implemented it.