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 - The [[space]] of all possible [[protopias]].
   - [[pull]] [[protopoi space]] [[protopia]].
 - A [[project]] started with [[jonathan the utopian]], [[open]] to all contributors.
-  - I would love for minded people to explore [[m prime]] within the [[agora]] or any other tools well suited for [[modelling]] [[incremental improvements]].
+  - I dream of like minded people exploring [[m prime]] within the [[agora]] and any other tools and platforms well suited for [[modelling]] [[incremental improvements]].
 - See also [[protopoi reading club]].