diff --git a/antiflancia.md b/antiflancia.md
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--- a/antiflancia.md
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@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@
     - [[fascism]]
   - [[pull]] [[tenderloin]]
 
-It was in Antiflancia that I knew [[Moloch]]: I saw his true face in the corrupt beauty of those that ignored suffering even as it stared back; I saw them took shape in the rich that learnt (were raised) not to stray near the wrong places -- the places of suffering.
+It was in Antiflancia that I knew [[Moloch]]: I saw his true face in the corrupt beauty of those that ignored suffering even as it stared them back; I saw its [[egregore]] take shape in the rich that learnt (were raised, then taught) not to stray near the wrong places -- the places where suffering in hidden in plain view.
 
-The capital of Antiflancia is beautiful; they call it [[Omelas]].
+The capital of Antiflancia is not ugly, as you might expect, but rather beautiful; they call it [[Omelas]].
 
 
diff --git a/omelas.md b/omelas.md
index f6f0c2ba7..783a0889d 100644
--- a/omelas.md
+++ b/omelas.md
@@ -4,4 +4,5 @@
   - [[city]]
   - [[san francisco]] is not that far from [[omelas]]
   - [[pull]] [[the ones who walk away from omelas]]
+  - [[go]] http://theanarchistlibrary.org/library/ursula-k-le-guin-the-ones-who-walk-away-from-omelas.pdf