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 This open letter was written in early [[May 2024]] with the occasion of the **20th anniversary of the [[April 29th]] publication of [[Google]]'s [[founders letter]] on the occasion of its [[2004-08-19]] [[IPO]].** I write with the pro-social intent of inviting Google the corporation, its employees and the internet at large to a constructive retrospective of the years lived together since Google started engaging with the [[greater internet community]] as a public company. 
 
-This letter is written with good intentions, in the spirit of [[openness]] and [[loving kindness]] towards all beings, following the [[principle of charity]], as an individual who happens to be an employee of [[Google]] as of the time of writing.
+This letter is written with good intentions, in the spirit of [[openness]] and [[loving kindness]] towards all beings, following the [[principle of charity]], as an individual with a public internet presence who happens to be an employee of [[Google]] as of the time of writing.
 
-It contains a series of proposals, meaning a series of well-meaning recommendations and declarations of intents to improve Google according to my views.
+This letter contains, or links to, a series of proposals for changes in the company and : meaning a series of well-meaning recommendations and declarations of intents to improve Google according to my views.
 
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