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 	- #push [[revolution in the twenty first century]]
 		- I like to think of [[flancia]] as the world as it could be, improved through a series of [[peaceful]] revolutions.
 			- [[protopoi]] is the [[space]] of composable [[atomic revolutions]]; rational and well meaning changes for the better.
-				- we can [[explore]] it together!
+				- we can [[explore]] this space together, and to do so it is that I set out to build [[an agora]].
+				- I am a [[flancian]] and this [[agora]] contains my [[manifesto]].
 			- In Flancia they used the [[internet]] to build a global [[commons]].
-				- #pull [[knowledge commons]]
-	- I am a [[flancian]] and this [[agora]] contains my [[manifesto]].
+				- #pull [[knowledge commons]] [[internet]]
 	- https://twitter.com/flancian/status/1368252143338192898
 	- https://twitter.com/flancian/status/1462091524985045001
 - #pull [[internationals]] [[free, fair and alive]] [[patterns]]
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