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   - A [[bag of holding]].
   - [[equivalent]] to or [[convergent]] with all the knowledge, art and beauty potentially contained therein or transitively derived.
 
-I'm writing a book. I call it [[Flancia]]. I have lofty aspirations, as per usual, but it is really only a rough [[draft]].
+I'm trying to write a book. It's titled [[Flancia]]. I have lofty aspirations, as per usual, but it is really only a rough [[draft]].
 
 In lieu of the book, you'll have to accept this: this note you're reading, and the links you may choose to follow as you'll find them embedded in this sometimes awkward medium, which I've put together as a gift for [[you]].