From 321658d458d78a7664cbb3d1034b7ea116d2e062 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Flancian <0@flancia.org>
Date: Sat, 1 Aug 2026 00:13:39 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] autopushed

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 zine.md | 9 +++------
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/zine.md b/zine.md
index bd53b9e6f..f1e5b2d78 100644
--- a/zine.md
+++ b/zine.md
@@ -83,19 +83,16 @@ Maitreya! Y Tara…
 
 `
 ```poetry
-Gone gone
-
+Gone gone,
 Gone beyond
 
 Everybody gone 
-
 to the other shore
 
-Gone free
+Gone free,
 Gone kindly
 
-When you have to go:
-
+(When you have to go…)
 Go free
 Go kindly