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   - [[december adventure]] :)
   - [[poll]]:
     - I ran a poll whether to try to kill or heal [[Moloch]] in [[2024]] and it came out [[heal Moloch]].
-    - I'll write  an [[open letter to Moloch]] and try to reason things out, try to disentangle ourselves constructively and help them improve on views, values and behaviours.
+    - I thus plan to write an [[open letter to Moloch]] and try to reason things out, try to disentangle ourselves constructively and mutually improve on views, values and behaviours.