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-Here we are in the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- which serves, by extension, as an entry point to the [[Agora of Flancia]].
+This is the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- which serves, by extension, as an entry point to the [[Agora of Flancia]].
 
 If you are reading this in an [[Agora]] proper, you should see it rendered surrounded by several other indexes -- potentially one for each user contributing to the Agora, in some order :) If you are reading this in [[git]] or an only partially supported editor, please visit <strong>anagora.org</strong> or some other well-known Agora to render this with resolved links and full context :).
 
@@ -18,7 +18,6 @@ The following are maybe interesting nodes to serve as entry points to this garde
     
 Beyond checking the resources in the nodes proper (mostly text notes), remember to check for [[links]] in and out of each context established through use.
 
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 # Journals
 - Nodes whose titles look like dates, like e.g. those matching [[ISO 8601]] or [[RFC 3339]], are interpreted as declarations of public [[journals]].
 - If you visit node [[journals]] in an Agora, it should lead you to a variety of time-anchored contributions, e.g.:
@@ -57,4 +56,4 @@ If you remember one thing, remember this: [[In Flancia there is an Agora]] :)
 
 Back here on [[2024-03-18]], after I thought: [[throw a nine]]. I have been playing with dice with [[Lady Burup]] :)
 
-If you remember some other words from all I write, remember these: [[Maitreya]], [[Tara]], [[Avalokiteshvara]]!
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+If you remember some other words from all I write, remember these: [[Maitreya]], [[Tara]], [[Avalokiteshvara]]!