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 	- [[pull]] [[stpa handbook]] [[stpa workshop]]
 	- [[push]] [[stpa]]
 	- 4 [[steps]]
-		- start with the [[losses]], which are 
+	- step one
+		- start with the [[losses]], which involve something of value to stakeholders
 		- continue by defining the scope of the system
-	- can be applied recursively
-	- [[hazards]] + [[environmental conditions]] -> [[losses]]
-	- [[hazards]] are states or conditions to be prevented.
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+		- find [[hazards]]  - [[hazards]] are systemic states or conditions to be prevented.
+		- [[hazards]] + [[environmental conditions]] -> [[losses]]
+	- can be applied recursively
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