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 - [[18]] is [[right understanding]] in the [[flancia]] [[pattern language]].
   - Flancia is in some ways a [[calendar]]. I usually revisit the Flancia Pattern language daily, considering the day of the date as my default focus.
-- [[drishtis]] [[29]] meaning that 29 tends to remind me of items on which my focus is trained on by default in the running month
-  - [[17]] was beautiful
+- [[drishtis]] ~ [[29]] as 29 tends to remind me of items on which my focus is trained on by default in the running month.
+  - on this note [[7]] and [[17]] this month were beautiful as usual
   - [[20]] [[agora slides]] -> [[fotl]]
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