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 # Make up Links That Dont Exist Yet
 
-- The [[internet]] lets you make up and write down (post) links that don't exist yet. If you craft them right, you can just create them later.
-  - This is feasible only with platforms with [[sensible urls]].
-    - The [[agora]] tries to support the use of social conventions for cross-linking and shared discovery we can use while we exercise this craft of [[writing down links that don't exist yet]].
+- The [[internet]] lets you make up and use (post) links that don't exist yet. If you craft them right, you can create them and make them useful later.
   - This is an [[optimist]] use of the internet.
     - I believe it has [[potential]].
-    - [[pull]] [[optimistic]] [[thinking]], [[utopia]].
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+    - [[pull]] [[optimistic]] [[thinking]] [[utopia]].
+- This works much better when using platforms with [[sensible urls]].
+- It is my [[objective]] that the [[agora]] supports any social conventions useful for this purpose. 
+- [[pull]] [[writing down links that don't exist yet]].
 
 [//begin]: # "Autogenerated link references for markdown compatibility"
-[agora]: agora "Agora"
 [potential]: potential "Potential"
 [pull]: pull "Pull"
 [thinking]: thinking "Thinking"
 [utopia]: utopia "Utopia"
+[agora]: agora "Agora"
 [//end]: # "Autogenerated link references"
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