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 This, in a nutshell, is the spirit of the [[Agora]] I am proposing and have been trying to build: if you share a proposal for the betterment of society, our endeavors together, or any interesting subset of them, an Agora will be interested by default. 
 
-If you share a proposal for the betterment of a company, the internet or society at large, please consider joining this Agora :)
+If you are interested in sharing proposals for the betterment of a company or other actor in society, please consider joining this Agora :)
 
 ## What the Agora and Google are