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       - See [[agora howto]] if you'd like to contribute to the [[agora]] as a [[user]].
     - The [[second stoa]] focuses on freeing, opening up and otherwise improving the [[internet]] using [[open source]] and [[open ethics]].
       - See [[agora protocol]], [[flanbook]], if you'd like to participate.
-    - The [[third stoa]] focuses on [[world improvement]]. It uses [[state of the art]] [[knowledge tools]] to model the world and its problems and execute on incremental improvements.
+    - The [[third stoa]] focuses on general [[world improvement]]. It uses [[state of the art]] [[knowledge tools]] to model the world and its problems as seen and evaluated by [[all]] [[people]] and then tries to execute incremental improvements.
       - See [[protopia]], [[eutopia]], [[world improvement]], [[flancia]].
 - [[pull]] [[stoas]] [[agora]]