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 # Thrive
 
 - [[pull]] [[thriving]]
-- In [[Flancia]], the inalienable [[right]] of all [[conscious]] [[entities]].
-  - A [[human right]].
+- In [[Flancia]], thriving is the inalienable [[right]] of all [[conscious]] [[entities]].
+  - A [[human right]] in particular.
 
 
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