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   - I first read the article and then I watched the ad. 
   - You could say the ad does miss any note worth hitting; I did like some aspects like the dad's voice (is it the real one, I wonder?) and the fact that it's not too long.
   - But it has the usual by now out-of-touch aesthetic of Google ads, which you could call [[enterprise whimsy]]. 
-  - And 
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+  - And it's just... a bit nonsensical, on top of the other criticisms. Why is the dad involved at all? He comes across as lazy. If this was an ad showing how a 
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