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-Here we are in the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- and by extension, through composition, an entry point to the [[Agora of Flancia]].
+Here we are in the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- and by extension, through composition, an entry point to the [[Agora of Flancia]], which is a [[Knowledge Commons]].
 
 If you are reading this in the [[Agora]] proper, you should see it rendered surrounded by several other indexes -- potentially one for each user contributing to the Agora, in some order :)
 
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ You can also contribute straight from the [[Fediverse]] once you get an account
 Once you sign up to the [[Fediverse]], you can follow [[@agora@botsin.space]] and it will watch your posts for [[wikilinks]]. You can configure the bot to include the full text of your post or only links; and to also include, and respond to, post with #hashtags.
 
 ## If you want to write something quickly and don't care about attribution
-Consider just leaving an anonymous note anywhere around the [[Agora]] in a [[stoa]], which is a public space meant for collaboration (think [[wiki]] or shared editor).
+Consider just leaving an anonymous note anywhere around the [[Agora]] in a [[stoa]], which is a public space meant for collaboration (think [[wiki]] or shared editor) available in each [[node]].
 
 ## For more
 Please [[reach out]] if you want to try [[note taking]] or the [[Fediverse]], regardless of whether you would like to contribute your notes to the [[Agora]]; same if you have questions or just need help in general!