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 - [[Silke Helfrich]] and [[David Bollier]], who extended on the previous and worked actively on a [[Pattern Language]] for the Commons.
 - [[Murray Bookchin]] for developing [[municipalism]] and his vision for [[the revolution in the 21st century]].
 
-Finally, a [[caveat emptor]]: the [[reference Agora]] is highly [[idiosyncratic]]. It is [[linked]] to a pragmatic project directed towards world improvement, specifically an experiment in [[protopian thinking]] applied to [[global reform and revolution]]. This project tries to explore the full nature of the internet as it could be, using the [[tools]] at hand to work on pressing [[tasks]] as we try to optionally improve the world together. More concretely, [[Flancia]] is an exploration on the power of [[tools of thought]], including [[social media]], to advance [[altruism]] and other forms of [[loving kindness]], including [[rationality]].
+Finally, a [[caveat emptor]]: the [[reference Agora]] is highly [[idiosyncratic]]. It is [[linked]] to a pragmatic project directed towards world improvement, specifically an experiment in [[protopian thinking]] applied to [[global reform and revolution]]. This project tries to explore the full nature of the internet as it could be, using the [[tools]] at hand to work on pressing [[tasks]] as we try to optionally improve the world together. More concretely, [[Flancia]] is an exploration on the power of [[tools of thought]], including [[social media]] and more generally distributed [[writing]], to advance [[altruism]], [[rationality]] and [[loving kindness]].
 
 ## Agora Commons