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 - [[flancia book]]:
 
-Here we go. Once more onto the breach; today I start writing a book I started writing years ago, and will take me years to write.
+Here we go. Once more onto the breach; maybe it is today we start writing a book I started writing years ago, and will take me or us many more years to write.