From 0693d45ea55138450f5986b28ae561c6632c9c6d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Flancian <0@flancia.org>
Date: Fri, 4 Jun 2021 19:19:45 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] [[snapshot]]: 2021-06-04 19:19:45

Affected files:

flancia.md
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 flancia.md | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/flancia.md b/flancia.md
index 84595ab1c..b493a0eb8 100644
--- a/flancia.md
+++ b/flancia.md
@@ -4,14 +4,13 @@
   - [[pull]] [[book]].
 - One of many [[places]] in our mind.
   - Its [[class]] is [[protopia]].
-  - The world of the [[Flancians]]. A world similar to ours but also much unlike.
-  - In Flancia there are many [[bolos]].
-  - In Flancia there is an [[agora]].
+  - The world of the [[Flancians]]. A world similar to ours, but [[incrementally better]].
   - I am a [[Flancian]] and this is my manifesto:
     - In [[Flancia]] there is no [[poverty]].
     - In [[Flancia]] there is no [[privilege]].
-    - In [[Flancia]] we will one day [[meet]].
-  - In Flancia people try to act [[honestly]], [[charitably]], [[compassively]], [[ethically]], [[pro-socially]],[[ cooperatively]], [[rationally]].
+    - In [[Flancia]] we may one day [[meet]].
+	- In Flancia there is an [[Agora]].
+  - Flanciapeople try to act [[honestly]], [[charitably]], [[compassively]], [[ethically]], [[prosocially]],[[ cooperatively]], [[rationally]].
   - In Flancia everybody [[thrives]].
   - In Flancia, people dedicate a fraction of their free time and resources to help others.
     - by volunteering [[time]] and [[resources]] as they can.