diff --git a/book.md b/book.md
index ff2484d24..8625ae527 100644
--- a/book.md
+++ b/book.md
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ These are the chapters of [[Flancia]]:
 - [[Protopoi Space]].
 - [[On the pedagogy of the revolution]].
 
-Consider this an offering to the [[people]]. 
+Please consider this an offering to the [[people]].
 
-Have a nice day, and may you ever [[thrive]]!
+Have a nice day, and may you [[thrive]]!
 
 
 [//begin]: # "Autogenerated link references for markdown compatibility"