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 - an [[agora editor]]
   - [[roam like]]
   - [[go]] https://obsidian.md
-  - As of [[2021-05-07]] the recommended [[agora editor]].
-  - Previously I had tried it after [[roam]] -- but I left it behind for [[foam]] on due to it not being [[open source]].
+  - as of [[2021-05-07]] the recommended [[agora editor]].
+	  - previously I had tried it after [[roam]] -- but I left it behind for [[foam]] on due to it not being [[open source]].
 	  - [[foam]] seemed more easily extensible to me.
   	  - This thread was what sealed the deal, didn't make it sound like open source was likely to happen anytime soon: https://forum.obsidian.md/t/open-sourcing-of-obsidian/1515 
-		  - https://flancia.org/go/why-not-obsidian
-	  - As of [[2021-05-07]] I'm back to [[obsidian]] from [[foam]]. I no longer think this is problematic.
+	  - I wrote https://flancia.org/go/why-not-obsidian.
+	  - as of [[2021-05-07]] I'm back to [[obsidian]] from [[foam]]. I no longer think it's a deal breaker as pro-social companies might need to ref
 	    - See [[defoam]] for the process.
 	 
 https://twitter.com/flancian/status/1390757242786533384